The Story of Key, Preview of my Story

Name: Key Age: ???? Job: Serial Killer Info: Key was killed by warking at a harware store, Someone pushed the rack, of fresh cut, sharppend keys ontop of him, stabbing and cutting him everywhere, but, he came back to life years later, and is now afther Mase, the man who killed him son, Key used a Large sharpped key as his wepond, when Key kills someone; He takes their House key or any key the have on them, and puts it on his large key ring he keeps on his belt, He stalks his victims like a ghost, he is very silent, never makes a sound, His eye's glow when there is no moon or stars in the sky, His long Orange hair stays long, no matter what. Key never Takes his mask off, His inter face and body is coverd in stitches and Scars, from his unplesent death. He has an odd fedish of watching people bleed, he sometimes will drink his victims blood. He can sence fear, the more someone is afraid, the more he get excited, and ready to kill. Key is very tall and thin, he normally towers over his victims. No one as escaped him yet, not a soul.
Chapter 1 "Silent Night"

The night was still as a tall dark figure walked slowly in the shadows. The moon was not in the sky tonight, nor were the stars, it was dark, and still. There was no sounds too be heard, all was silent, except for the sound of keys jingling. A pair of blood red and black eyes glowed in the dark, there was no street lights, just those two glowing orbs, looking out into the night. A young girl walked on the sidewalk, all alone. She looked scared, and walked swiftly. The figure started to follow her slowly, the sound of keys no longer herd. It was quite, too quite. The young girl started to panic, she could tell, something wasn't right , she kicked up her speed as she ran in the direction of her home. The man smiled as he started to move faster, almost like a shadow, unseen, unheard, and at incredible speed. The young girl started to panic more as she kept running. A grin spread across the man's face, he could feel her fear, it excited him, making him want to see her blood more and more. He appeared in front of the young girl, she fell back and screamed. Her screams were cut short as a large sharpen Key stabbed her in the chest. Blood splatted everywhere, and all over the man. He grinned widely under his mask as he picked up her body and headed home. This man, was not like any other man, he was murdered, but something he loved. Keys. He looked up into the dark night sky and smiled. Key put his prize on his shoulder, as he headed back into the darkness.

Well that's chapter 1! Tell me how you liked it, I'll post chapter 2 soon.